| K-2
Writing Strong Verbs
List some weak verbs on the board or read an old Basal Reader
where the pages abound with sentences like,
"The Boy went outside." Talk about
how verbs are action words. Ask students to describe
what you are doing. Hop across the room. Run across the room.
Skip across the room, then ask them what it would sound like if
the writer just said. "She went across the
room."
Now students get up in pairs and come up with new ways to move
their bodies across the room. When you find a new way, write
down the verb which describes it. Later share
the movements and the words.
Note: If a student pair can't think of a word to
describe the action, the class can help.
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verb lists and we run them here..............
3-4
Said Is Dead Day.
Shut up, he
explained.
One to revise dialogue is to come up with new verbs for
the overused said.
Make a list of stronger verbs to
replace the word said in a scene. If you want start with the
alphabet you can follow the letters of the alphabet.
Example
asked
answered
barked
balled
bellowed
bantered
carped
called
commented
cajoled
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your students lists and we will post them here......
Step 2
Write alliterative sentences using your verbs.
Example " Carping crows coaxed and cajoled cautious
cows..."
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After you
have made your list try replacing a few saids in your stories.
5-8
Strong writing abounds with active verbs. One way to dig
for verbs is to replace weak verbs and adverbs with an more
descriptive verbs. Practice by replacing two words with
one strong verb.
walked slowly
better: crept tiptoed etc
talked low
ran fast
moved uncertainly
sang loudly
Go
through your own writing and replace adverbial clauses with
stronger verbs where appropriate.
9-12
Build your own Thesaurus
Often
times in academic papers we get stuck using the same verbs over
and over again in the same paper.. Here's an idea.
Create your own thesaurus at the back of your writers notebook
by listing similar verbs for some of the most widely used
verbs in academic English.
shows
describes
interprets
defines
illustrates
imagines
analyses
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